obsession called while you were out ([info]flyingcarpet) wrote in [info]smutty_claus,
2004-12-06 08:16:00
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Fic: Are You Experienced? (Draco/Hermione), by Marks

Title: Are You Experienced?
Author/Artist: [info]marksykins
Recipient's name: [info]smschrader
Rating: NC-17
Pairing: Draco/Hermione
Warnings: Boy wanking, characters are both 16
Author/Artist's notes: I hope your Smutty Claus brought you exactly what you wanted, smschrader! Your requests were very easy -- and fun! -- to accommodate. Thank you to those who listened to my griping as I wrote this.

Read the story here.
Tags: draco/hermione

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[info]reposoir

December 6 2004, 14:21:26 UTC 7 years ago

I'm normally not a fan of D/Hr (maybe because I can't find many decent ones out there) but that was 1) hot and 2) a good read. I really enjoyed it. Funny in just the right spots, sexy in all the rest. Your recipient must have been good this year!

[info]exit_chrysalis

December 7 2004, 02:08:47 UTC 7 years ago

Haha, or maybe very naughty...

[info]marksykins

7 years ago

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[info]smschrader

December 6 2004, 14:46:08 UTC 7 years ago

Hurrah!! It was excellent. I always love the humor in D/Hr and you did it so well.....and first time sex...oh <33333. Thank you!

Anonymous

December 6 2004, 15:14:23 UTC 7 years ago

Glad you liked it. *g*

[info]marksykins

7 years ago

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[info]notfudge

December 7 2004, 02:31:58 UTC 7 years ago

*is speechless*
I'd normally offer more feedback then that, but, *gabbles*
(this is a good thing, yes)

[info]marksykins

January 5 2005, 19:27:56 UTC 7 years ago

Hee! This is definitely a good thing. *gabbles back at you*

[info]lissannej

December 7 2004, 02:43:44 UTC 7 years ago

Ha ha! I like how Draco lied about being experienced -- typically him. This was fun :-)

[info]marksykins

January 5 2005, 19:30:01 UTC 7 years ago

*giggles* Thanks! I think I can only write these two when it's ridiculous, but they're so much fun to write this way! :)

And, ooh, love the name change. Meant to say that yesterday but LJ was being a pain.

[info]lissannej

7 years ago

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[info]flyingcarpet

December 7 2004, 15:13:31 UTC 7 years ago

I love it-- you managed to write hot smut without getting them out of character... and with these two, that's tough to manage.

Great job!

[info]marksykins

January 5 2005, 19:41:12 UTC 7 years ago

I agree with that. They're fun together as long as it's not some Romeo & Juliet tragic thing because...er, that's not either of them. :)

Thank you!

[info]magicofisis

December 10 2004, 04:25:30 UTC 7 years ago

Oh, this was great! I wasn't expecting you to be able to keep them in character for the whole time, but you did a fantastic job at that. Best line:

Draco snatched his wand back, wiping the handle on his trouser leg. He'd just had these laundered, too. Now he'd have to burn them.

But I also really liked the snippets of snarky conversations in the middle. Fantastic!

[info]marksykins

January 5 2005, 19:42:31 UTC 7 years ago

Thanks, hon! Did you suspect it was me at all? The snarky conversations are my favorite part. I swear, I only write Draco for the banter. Or making him miserable. Or some combination of the two. Hee.

[info]aqua_chuu

December 10 2004, 15:51:28 UTC 7 years ago

Aw, this was so hot! Gah. I've never read many D/Hr but this was certainy fabulous. =D

[info]marksykins

January 5 2005, 19:42:54 UTC 7 years ago

Thank you very much! I'm so glad you enjoyed it. :)

[info]merrycontrary

December 14 2004, 02:39:52 UTC 7 years ago

I loved Draco's POV! It was brilliant!

[info]marksykins

January 5 2005, 19:43:35 UTC 7 years ago

Thanks! *likes writing him bratty* The Draco muse was strong while I was writing fest fics.

Anonymous

December 19 2004, 21:28:19 UTC 7 years ago

Oh my god!!

Sooo hot and sexy and beautiful and funny too!!! GAH!

The last line = : )

I can't wait to find out who you are. *waits* Is it time yetttt?

[info]marksykins

January 5 2005, 19:44:17 UTC 7 years ago

Hi, it was me! Heh. I have no idea if you'll see this, but if you do, thanks so much for the sweet comment! :)

[info]cheshyre

December 31 2004, 15:09:07 UTC 7 years ago

"Mmm," she said neutrally. "It's good you were able to overcome those insurmountable odds, then."
What a great line!

[info]marksykins

January 5 2005, 19:49:15 UTC 7 years ago

*snort*

One of my favorites. I love seeing the boy knocked down a peg or ten. Thanks!

[info]ishtar79

January 5 2005, 11:44:53 UTC 7 years ago

That was some serious hot, reastically akward, fumbling teenage!sex. Certainly hotter than all the D/Hr (or a lot of Draco/anyone) who seem to see him as an unlikely 16-year old sex God.

Yes, but then I cleaned twenty-eight transfigured bird cages, and had half of a wank. That takes a lot out of a person, and I'm a growing boy."

"Could have fooled me."

"..."


*giggle* Loved the banter.

I was interested in D/Hr when I first got into fandom, before the Badfic put me off-your ficlet has somewhat reawakened my interest, yet I know I probably won't find anything else to enjoy to so much. Wah, cruel fate!

[info]marksykins

January 5 2005, 19:51:24 UTC 7 years ago

I have a lot of pairings that I really like, but I can't seem to find any satisfactory fic for them! *sigh* This is one of them. I know of a few very sweet, realistically done D/Hr fics, but they're sadly in the minority.

Poor Draco. So much leather that he'd never wear. ;)

Thanks, love. I'm glad you liked the sex and the banter. Heck, I should rename my journal that. *snicker*

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7 years ago

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[info]kitsu_fire

January 19 2005, 12:54:39 UTC 7 years ago

Three Cheers for smut!!!!!! Loved it! Lip smacking, panty-wetting, 'oh my god I wish I was her' stories make me wanna write. Bravo!

[info]kou_shun_u

January 19 2005, 13:14:23 UTC 7 years ago

^___^ very amusing and enjoyable. having it from draco's point of view like that and his lying, and then his pleasure....it was just great.
but to me the most freaky thing was my stomach growling exactly when his did.

[info]gryster

January 19 2005, 13:39:50 UTC 7 years ago

Fabulous! Funny and hot :)

Loved direct!Hermione who clinically asks Draco for sex.

Favourite bit:
"It's just sex, Malfoy." She rolled her eyes. "You've done it already, I want to. Yes or no?"

"Yes," blurted Draco instantly. Sixteen year old boy! He shouldn't be judged!

Wonderfully done.

[info]shadylane88

January 19 2005, 20:26:49 UTC 7 years ago

That was SO good. I love D/Hr fics. They have always been my OTP, you write beautiful smut. And it was funny too! Fav line :

"I'm hungry, tired, and sexually frustrated, and it's all your fault. My father will be hearing about this."

"Is that the father in Azkaban?"

"Don't you dare talk about him that way."

"Ah. So you have two fathers, then."

"Granger..."

"Quiet. I'm reading."

[info]mushxtapsx1899

January 27 2005, 22:51:41 UTC 7 years ago

Suberb!

I really loved your story. It was so cute and funny! I loved this whole section! "I suppose we're stuck here." Granger looked like her puppy had just been murdered. Gryffindors were such drama queens.

Sniffing, Draco made his way back to his seat, slumping down again. "S'pose so." Granger gawked at him from the doorway.

So, this is what happened when you got caught wanking. Draco would have preferred going blind.


***


"How long do you think we'll be stuck here?"

"I suppose someone will find us in the morning. Now, shut up, Granger, I'm meditating."


***


Growl.

"Didn't you eat before you came here?"

"Yes, but then I cleaned twenty-eight transfigured bird cages, and had half of a wank. That takes a lot out of a person, and I'm a growing boy."

"Could have fooled me."

"..."


***


"Do you have any cards, or anything with you?"

"Yes, I always take a passel of various amusements along with me to solitary detention."

"You really love hearing your own voice, don't you?"

"Don't you? You seem to be asking enough questions."

"I simply thought...never mind. I'll find something to read; Professor McGonagall has the most varied collection of Transfiguration journals of any academic mind in the Western Hemisphere."

"Fascinating."



***


"I'm hungry, tired, and sexually frustrated, and it's all your fault. My father will be hearing about this."

"Is that the father in Azkaban?"

"Don't you dare talk about him that way."

"Ah. So you have two fathers, then."

"Granger..."

"Quiet. I'm reading."


***

Just Brilliant! Great job. Give your self a pat on the back!

[info]allthingsgood

January 31 2005, 18:13:49 UTC 7 years ago

I love the sarcasm! Especially Capitalizing Everytime You Talked About Him Having Experience. Harhar :D

Anonymous

July 2 2005, 05:25:10 UTC 6 years ago

haha

i feel so bad for dracos lack of experience....but i still think it was great!

[info]marksykins

6 years ago

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Anonymous

July 6 2005, 21:45:34 UTC 6 years ago

Oh goodness... that was just... delightful! It was a pleasure to read, especially the smutty parts. Ahhh, the wonders of teenage sex. Anyways, superb story, if I do say so myself.

[info]marksykins

August 3 2005, 03:40:43 UTC 6 years ago

*g* Thanks a lot for reading!

[info]altdeg1

July 11 2005, 20:36:19 UTC 6 years ago

Ooh, goodness.

I love One Shots. Haha. And THAT was HOT. Now, there was a bit ooc from Hermione, but you know..if ever there was a side of Hermione like that..then you really perfected it. Heh.

[info]marksykins

August 3 2005, 03:41:41 UTC 6 years ago

Re: Ooh, goodness.

Yes, well, with PWP I think a little OOC is forgiveable -- Draco is, too, if I'm being honest with myself. Still, I tried. :D Thanks very much for reading!

[info]zentiis

August 8 2005, 12:19:11 UTC 6 years ago

*loves*
that was just delicious, draco's inexperience was just delightful.
*licks*

Anonymous

August 11 2005, 03:06:16 UTC 6 years ago

it's really hard tryin to find awesome stories but this one has got to be the hottest ones i've ever read..thank you and keep it up

D

Anonymous

September 6 2005, 03:19:44 UTC 6 years ago

Very very good. I liked Hermione's whole analytical point of view. Actually asking how it felt for a man to masterbate! And then being embarassed when she admitted that she did the same. At the start of the fic she couldn't even say wank.

rain

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[info]kos_mos_04

December 18 2005, 05:32:42 UTC 6 years ago

H-Huzzah... *waves flag weakly*

W-Wow... This is the first Harry Potter lemon I've read and just... w-wow... Excellently done, considering I'm becoming a huge fan of D/Hr in the past umm... let's see here... Three days. Excellent!

[info]dramaflag_girl

September 26 2006, 02:12:26 UTC 5 years ago

i love this fucking fic

Anonymous

November 4 2006, 18:48:59 UTC 5 years ago

Lovely! I usually only read Harry/Draco, but this was sooo hot. Dammit, you make me wanna go straight!
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